Entry: flying on wings on colour Tuesday, July 19, 2005



 

Flying on wings of Colour

 

 

She charms her smile in the tune with love

As she, the girls sit upon the grove

She laughs a laugh unlike one at all

And lets the rabbits nibble there

The pale tattoos

That shine so bright

So vividly dancing around her arm

The image of her world is distorted now

Her image blurred by wet eyes.

                     Dewy.

She sees through a screen of black and white

And finds that she laughs no longer

A butterfly flits into the garden…followed

By the tune of harmony and colour

 

This creature wild and yet so strong paints the picture

With a myriad of colours.

 

The scene exists no longer

                                           With splashes of black

Dashings of white

 

The colours collude to form a tableux. The raging. The raging red and bolts that burgundy brings.

   1 comments

Anna
July 19, 2005   11:36 AM PDT
 
Smae, Smae, Smae... what can I say. I think you already know this is a beautiful piece of work... I'm glad we all had to wait so long to read it.

Its interesting how you're use of mood changes in the last disjointed Paragraph... I like It!

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