Entry: wings Saturday, July 16, 2005



i'm afraid this isn't very good. oh well!



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She watched, filled with
awe, wonder, jealousy,
as the graceful swan of a ballerina
twirled, leapt, flew,
flawless (without falling).
How she wished,
how she wished she could be as
graceful, perfect, unfailing.
Just for once.

But until she gains the
strength, faith, courage
to break through her cocoon of
self-pity, hopelessness, fear
(the fear of falling, failing),
while everyone else
takes a deep breath of adrenaline, runs boldly past,
excited, enthusiastic, fearless,
to experience the flight she will neither gain nor lose,
she will forever be
waiting in the wings.

   4 comments

stephy
July 23, 2005   01:32 AM PDT
 
yea i realli liked th eway u interpreted the topic.. wings as in side wings and flight.. realli kewl!
Name
July 18, 2005   06:15 PM PDT
 
Very pretty. I really like the way you've used brackets. I think its clever.
Anna
July 17, 2005   08:12 PM PDT
 
I can tell you were a dancer...

Very beautifly sewn together, well done
Candice
July 17, 2005   04:43 PM PDT
 
Not bad at all... love the photo ;D

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